Script has been slightly updated
Still three pages long... needing to cut out more or bunch up my script which I do not want to do... describing can take up a majority of your script, and it is a estimate that one page per a minute... but in this case the script will most likely be three minutes.
Still three pages long... needing to cut out more or bunch up my script which I do not want to do... describing can take up a majority of your script, and it is a estimate that one page per a minute... but in this case the script will most likely be three minutes.
Also starting to think the original concept for story has gone walk about.
It started off being a bit of a tale of how this doofus named 'Pearl' is a dork and is oblivious to how he is not liked, this Pearl quotes his pearls of wisdom to people whom could not give hoot,
He is going to his girlfriend Paris at her house, to then take her to a function, he quotes pearls on the bus, everyone moves away from him, transition of him he is now asleep on the bus, when he was meant to be at Paris's house already to pick her up for a function, he is late quotes a pearl of wisdom to her, she is annoyed with him but sees the flower and decides to let it fly.
Then when arriving at this function Pearl is being a obnoxious jerk,
Then when arriving at this function Pearl is being a obnoxious jerk,
acting like he is some sort of celebrity, Paris is feeling left out,
Pearl then quotes to her, 'distance makes the heart grow fonder' and walks off to talk to his good friend Monocles.
Paris distance in the background, cracks, she has had enough of his wisdom and abandonment, she makes a scene and throws the flower pearl gave her on the ground then stomping on it and yells they are through!
Pearl imagines the flower to be his heart getting stomped on.
The next day heartbroken Pearl is a wreck, outside the bus stop, stubble, drinking out of a brown paper bag... the bus drives past splashing him head to toe with water, he glances at the bus as it drives off he see's a banner reading; 'That's Life'
He then stands and thinks, throws the bottle on the lawn realizing yeah that is life... what am I doing here drinking on the side of the road I'm the pearl of wisdom, walks off into the sunset...! THE ENDS!
So that is what I was originally going for but my script has somewhat turned into this;
Pearl then quotes to her, 'distance makes the heart grow fonder' and walks off to talk to his good friend Monocles.
Paris distance in the background, cracks, she has had enough of his wisdom and abandonment, she makes a scene and throws the flower pearl gave her on the ground then stomping on it and yells they are through!
Pearl imagines the flower to be his heart getting stomped on.
The next day heartbroken Pearl is a wreck, outside the bus stop, stubble, drinking out of a brown paper bag... the bus drives past splashing him head to toe with water, he glances at the bus as it drives off he see's a banner reading; 'That's Life'
He then stands and thinks, throws the bottle on the lawn realizing yeah that is life... what am I doing here drinking on the side of the road I'm the pearl of wisdom, walks off into the sunset...! THE ENDS!
So that is what I was originally going for but my script has somewhat turned into this;
So if I am not happy with this...
Thinking what needs to be done is write the premise and stick to what that is... and at the end of the day what is wanted is a story that is; sweet, strong, short story... oh yeah and that is achievable animation wise, with the time limit that has been given.
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